Friday 14 March 2014

Writing

Another reason why school camps are good for you is because you get a lot of exercise and at the end of camp you just need sleep. School camps are amazing experiences and you should deffinatly go on one if you get the chance.

In conclusion I believe school camps are great and you get extraordinary experiences and get to bond with your classmates and teachers, so next time you get the chance to go on a school camp I say "GO!"

This Writing Shows My Connectives in red, I havn't got that much connectives but I think my writing is effective like this.

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