I Have Improved On Seeking Feedback Because When I Was Doing Math I Didnt Know What To Do I Asked Oliver And He Explained It.

I Have Found Maths Challanging Because I Didnt Get What To Do.

My Next Step Is To Persevere With My Maths

listen to ‘Ten Guitars (Luke & Thornton)’ on Audioboo

At the moment I think I can play ten guitars because I know and can play all the cords.

I have improved on my cord playing.

My next step is nothing.

Writing

Another reason why school camps are good for you is because you get a lot of exercise and at the end of camp you just need sleep. School camps are amazing experiences and you should deffinatly go on one if you get the chance.

In conclusion I believe school camps are great and you get extraordinary experiences and get to bond with your classmates and teachers, so next time you get the chance to go on a school camp I say "GO!"

This Writing Shows My Connectives in red, I havn't got that much connectives but I think my writing is effective like this.

Thorntons art :D

In my picture I made the trees and the ground stand out

It catches your eye doesn't it?