Eric Felt Sick As He Saw What Happened On The News, He Stood Up And Walked Into Maggie's Room, His Face Went Pale As He Realized Maggie Was Gone. He Went Outside And Looked For Maggie "MAGGIE, MAGGIE!" He Yelled As He Noticed Blood In The Car A Couple Houses Away From Him.

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